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Need your rate on my team
I'd like to know how good my team is just for healthy curiosuty Tehehahah

I'm not by any means pro at competitive poke matches but i'd like to know how strong my team for in-game matches and for competitive matches
EDIT: I'm not very serious about competitive, so a general analysis would be fine.
Pokemon #1-Starter-
Delphox (Female) @ X Accuracy
Ability: Blaze
Nature: Brave
Level: 65
EVs:
- Psyshock
- Psychic
- Fire Blast
- Flamethrower

Pokemon #2
Feraligatr (male) @ X Sp. Atk
Ability: Sheer Force
Nature: Adamant
Level: 74
EVs:
- Swords Dance
- Chip Away
- Water Fall
- Crunch

Pokemon #3
Raichu (male) @ Magnet
Ability: Static
Nature: Gentle
Level: 67
EVs:
- Grass Knot
- Thunder Shock
- Electro Ball
- Thunderbolt

Pokemon #4
Haxorus (male) @ Amulet Coin
Ability: Mold Breaker
Nature: Gentle
Level: 63
EVs:
- Dragon Claw
- Brick Break
- Dragon Dance
- Swords Dance (waiting to get the Earthquake TM)

Pokemon #5
Toxicroak (male) @ Black Belt
Ability: Dry Skin
Nature: Careful
Level: 62
EVs:
- Sucker Punch
- Poison Jab
- Revenge
- Venoshock

Pokemon #6
Absol (male) @ X Defense
Ability: Super Luck
Nature: Hardy
Level: 73
EVs:
- Night Slash
- Razor Wind
- Psycho Cut
- Pursuit

:D Thats all!

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Edited: Jan 31, 2017   /   Jan 31, 2017    3:43 PM
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RE: Need your rate on my team
In-game wise, it looks good. From a competitive standpoint, I would change up some of your move sets.

For Delphox's move set, I'd keep Psyshock and Flamethrower, and switch out Fire Blast and Psychic with something like Calm Mind and something to counter Delphox's weakness.

Psyshock for Attack and STAB
Flamethrower for Special Attack and STAB
Calm Mind for increasing both Psyshock and Flamethrower's damage, as well as Delphox's Special Defense.
and something like Grass Knot for Water Types or Dazzling Gleam for Dark Types, which Delphox is both weak to.

For Raichu, I'd get rid of Thunder Shock and replace it with something like Nuzzle. The para-hacks are real.


I'm not a very competitive person so my ideas may or may not be very good idk.

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Feb 02, 2017    7:49 AM
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RE: Need your rate on my team
(Jan 31, 2017 3:43 PM)Iceninja76 wrote:

In-game wise, it looks good. From a competitive standpoint, I would change up some of your move sets.

For Delphox's move set, I'd keep Psyshock and Flamethrower, and switch out Fire Blast and Psychic with something like Calm Mind and something to counter Delphox's weakness.

Psyshock for Attack and STAB
Flamethrower for Special Attack and STAB
Calm Mind for increasing both Psyshock and Flamethrower's damage, as well as Delphox's Special Defense.
and something like Grass Knot for Water Types or Dazzling Gleam for Dark Types, which Delphox is both weak to.

For Raichu, I'd get rid of Thunder Shock and replace it with something like Nuzzle. The para-hacks are real.


I'm not a very competitive person so my ideas may or may not be very good idk.

Me neither really, I just find competition rather a healthy activity every now and then, but I really appreciate your feedback.

Massive thanks !!:D

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Feb 02, 2017    1:29 PM
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RE: Need your rate on my team
For an in-game analysis you'll be fine. In-game is easy. Competitive-wise your team doesn't seem like it would stand much of a chance. Your item choices should be changed, the natures for some of your Pokemon don't benefit them, and you didn't list their EVs, so I'm assuming you haven't properly EV Trained them either. I realize you said you're not a very competitive person, but you did say you wanted to know how it would do in competitive matches.

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Feb 02, 2017    9:17 PM
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RE: Need your rate on my team
(Jan 31, 2017 1:49 AM)Wolfcub95 wrote:

I'd like to know how good my team is just for healthy curiosuty Tehehahah

I'm not by any means pro at competitive poke matches but i'd like to know how strong my team for in-game matches and for competitive matches
EDIT: I'm not very serious about competitive, so a general analysis would be fine.
Pokemon #1-Starter-
Delphox (Female) @ X Accuracy (I assume this is hold item? Never hold X items)
Ability: Blaze
Nature: Brave (Bad nature, I recommend Modest)
Level: 65
EVs: (252 Sp Attack, 252 Speed, 6 HP)
- Psyshock
- Psychic
- Fire Blast (Only reason to use Delphox over something better is Mystical Fire, and you only need 1 fire move so Fire Blast and Flamethrower are pretty bad, even if you want one instead of Mystical Fire, you don't need both. I'd use something like Psychic, Mystical Fire, Grass Knot and Protect)
- Flamethrower

Pokemon #2
Feraligatr (male) @ X Sp. Atk (Again, no X item, besides Feraligatr is a physical attacker, I'd recommend Assault Vest or a berry)
Ability: Sheer Force
Nature: Adamant (Yes)
Level: 74
EVs: (252 hp, 252 Attack, 6 Defense/Sp Def)
- Swords Dance
- Chip Away (Pretty Awful move)
- Water Fall
- Crunch

Pokemon #3
Raichu (male) @ Magnet
Ability: Static
Nature: Gentle (Worst nature in the game, never ever Gentle or Lax, they have 0 use on any Pokemon, especially Lax, I recomend Modest for this build you have)
Level: 67
EVs: (252 Sp Attack, 252 Speed, 6 HP)
- Grass Knot
- Thunder Shock (No, this is just a weaker thunder bolt)
- Electro Ball (3 electric moves is too much, this move isn't worth it either)
- Thunderbolt

(Raichu is a support pokemon usually, so something like Jolly/Adamant nature, Fake out, Nuzzle, Volt Switch, Endeavor, Protect, or in rare cases Electro Web)

Pokemon #4
Haxorus (male) @ Amulet Coin (Useless item in competitive, players don't give money)
Ability: Mold Breaker
Nature: Gentle (Bad nature, I recommend Jolly)
Level: 63
EVs: (252 Attack, 252 Speed, 6 HP)
- Dragon Claw
- Brick Break
- Dragon Dance
- Swords Dance (waiting to get the Earthquake TM)

Pokemon #5
Toxicroak (male) @ Black Belt (Not the best option but usuable)
Ability: Dry Skin (I'd go Poison Touch but this is usuable in a rain team)
Nature: Careful (I'd say Adamant)
Level: 62
EVs: (252 Attack)[/color][/size]
- Sucker Punch
- Poison Jab
- Revenge
- Venoshock (No, it's special attack, not worth, this is a great move in theory but it doesn't really work on anyone, every pokemon that wants this has a big issue whenever they use it, Salazzle doesn't live long enough for it, Toxipex has too many good moves to choose from, most poison types are physical, it's a hard move to make work)

Pokemon #6
Absol (male) @ X Defense (No, I recommend Scope Lens or Absolite)
Ability: Super Luck
Nature: Hardy (Adamant, for sure)
Level: 73
EVs: (252 Attack)
- Night Slash
- Razor Wind (Bad move)
- Psycho Cut
- Pursuit (Eh, it's okay, but I think there are probably better options.)

:D Thats all!

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